Things that I like:
- I'm happy with the overall aesthetic and style of the animation combined with the 2d graphics
- The motions has a nice organic quality, and the movement is fluid and interesting.
- The forms relate nicely to both the movement and to the underwater context of my final video.
- I like the pace of the video, and the way the movement in combination with the music creates a positive mood, where the forms seem to be happily roaming about together.
Things that could be improved:
- I'm not totally happy with the final image quality in some parts, which is a result of slightly enlarging my code image sequence in after effects for the close up shots. While I know this could have been avoided by not creating the close ups, I felt they were necessary for making the overall video more interesting and appealing (one shot for the whole thing would have been boring).
- This problem also could have been fixed by creating different variations of my coded file, where the forms were bigger for the close up shots and smaller for the distant shots.
- I think that the effect of the layer mode I used to composite the pyp file slightly took away some of the colour from my forms, but I didn't want to do colour correction and adding colour in after effects because i wanted to keep my coding and the decisions i made there in tact.
- I think my forms could have been taken further with the code, and made more unique, but I also think the simple look works well with the 2D graphics in creating a simple, but interesting composition.












































