white lines

I also realised one of the issues with the colours not looking quite right is the fact that i have them on a completely black background. Having it slightly more grey makes it look a lot nicer and not so contrasty.

I then repeated some of my earlier explorations with the new white lines in there as well...

and i felt my favourite is when the lines from each intersection move towards the centre, but only barely cross each other. I think this provides a nice overall shape, and ties them together, without looking messy or confusing.







Also looks quite nice with a gradient background, but im not sure if that will stay to the end or not yet.