composition development

Here i have been pushing the composition further, by introducing more forms that fill up the frame more. In this first image, i've tried a triangle composition, where the entire right side is full of forms, which then taper in towards the centre on the right.

I then tried a composition that works more base on thirds, and filled up the left hand side and the bottom right hand side, leaving the top right empty. I don't like this specific image, but i'm going to develop this composition.

Here i have combined this new composition with the more dynamic and curved style of forms, and i'm starting to think this is more effective. However in this version, the two white forms together on the right are a little too intense and stick out too much from the rest of the lines.